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TLA
Voltage
Posts : 3007
Hailing From : Where they ain't want me to be #ThaHall
Status : Bein' a badder hombre than ever before
 |  Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 3:50 pm | |
| Be less condescending, stop playing the victim and riding off other people'say opinions instead, and stop posting 24/7 on the compliments thread it makes you look needy. |
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The Mexican Samurai
Dynasty
Posts : 1136
Age : 32
Hailing From : San Jose, California
Status : Don't Call It A Comeback
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 5:31 pm | |
| Quit antagonizing people for the sake of antagonizing, it can get pretty annoying sometimes. That's about it. |
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Eclipse Diemos
Dynasty
Posts : 1442
Age : 28
Status : Welcome to the Outcast Era
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 6:00 pm | |
| Mmmm...the Mexiruna thing is only so funny so many times. It's not really something that is big part of your character so it's sometimes annoying to keep seeing it all the time. |
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Clark Duncan
Posts : 1746
Age : 29
Hailing From : Taylor Swift's bedroom
Status : My spirit animal's really a pterodactyl.
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 6:05 pm | |
| I honestly don't have anything blunt or overly critical to say here this time, I think you're one of the few doing really well at the moment. Keeping working hard on your promos and craft, don't lapse now because it appears you're onto a good thing. |
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Scarlet
Posts : 267
Age : 27
Hailing From : Virgina Beach, Va (Originally from Brooklyn, New York)
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 6:23 pm | |
| try to bit my tongue in places where I know it'll be a lose-lose situation if I try to defend myself. Just ignore and smile. |
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Stephanie Matsuda
Empire
Posts : 3092
Age : 39
Hailing From : BK
Status : Back to the drawing board...
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 6:37 pm | |
| You're on a roll. Both our promos could be a bit longer (though as of late I think they're pretty long). Other than that, keep up the good work! |
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Mstislav
Voltage
Posts : 2662
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 7:01 pm | |
| I'm wondering what happened to your idea of the EAW Soundtrack. Uh I don't have anything else really. Liking what I'm seeing so far.
Edit: To answer your question. He's just regular Finn for regular shows. I give the writers leeway to give him body paint if they want to. He's Russian so he's different from Balor. |
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Mr. DEDEDE
EAW Hall of Famer
Posts : 3518
Age : 33
Hailing From : The Gay Meat Community
Status : #LoveWins
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 7:28 pm | |
| I dont think youre putting your all into kissing my ass to get ahead (Since thats the only way TO get ahead around here) and I believe its holding you back from becoming World Champion |
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Lioncross
Showdown
Posts : 623
Age : 31
Status : Team Special Treatment
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 5th 2015, 7:39 pm | |
| I think you need to make it more obvious that kissing your ass is the only way to get ahead here.
(But really, I can't even blame you for the recent delays. Love the job you've done with my storyline.) |
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Stephanie Matsuda
Empire
Posts : 3092
Age : 39
Hailing From : BK
Status : Back to the drawing board...
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 6th 2015, 1:59 am | |
| - Aren Mstislav wrote:
- I'm wondering what happened to your idea of the EAW Soundtrack. Uh I don't have anything else really. Liking what I'm seeing so far.
Edit: To answer your question. He's just regular Finn for regular shows. I give the writers leeway to give him body paint if they want to. He's Russian so he's different from Balor. Just on a brief hiatus until my midterms were over, which ended earlier this week. I'll be working on it again over the weekend. Lioncross: Don't know you that well to have anything constructive to say, but so far I like what I'm reading. Keep but the good work, but you're a veteran so you already know that  |
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Eclipse Diemos
Dynasty
Posts : 1442
Age : 28
Status : Welcome to the Outcast Era
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 6th 2015, 2:18 am | |
| Hmm...I think just keep expanding on your character and your gimmick, but so far you are doing great! |
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StarrStan
Posts : 1133
Age : 30
Hailing From : Phila
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 6th 2015, 10:58 am | |
| You need to start devouring souls |
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Cailin Dillon
Empire
Posts : 747
Age : 37
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 6th 2015, 12:04 pm | |
| You should win even more matches. All the matches!!! |
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Devan Dubian
EAW Hall of Famer
Posts : 1998
Age : 30
Hailing From : Amazing Town
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 6th 2015, 12:43 pm | |
| You should be given the rein of your character and have yourself WIN EVEN MORE MATCHES. |
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Mstislav
Voltage
Posts : 2662
Age : 27
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 6th 2015, 1:27 pm | |
| You should give me your title. All the title |
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Nasir Escobar
Dynasty
Posts : 3316
Age : 27
Hailing From : Brick City BITCH~!
Status : If you don’t like your destiny, don’t accept it. Instead, have the courage to change it the way you want it to be~!
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 7th 2015, 2:18 pm | |
| hmm...come back to dynasty my brotha :] |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 31
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 7th 2015, 2:22 pm | |
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Stephanie Matsuda
Empire
Posts : 3092
Age : 39
Hailing From : BK
Status : Back to the drawing board...
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 7th 2015, 3:30 pm | |
| Dark Hadou Haruna |
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Carson Ramsay
Voltage
Posts : 1463
Age : 27
Hailing From : Batman, Turkey
Status : Stay down.
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game November 7th 2015, 3:48 pm | |
| take it easy on the anime and music vids linked in your promos |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 31
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game December 30th 2015, 6:01 am | |
| You do great with your promos already.... You need to stay consistent and keep doing you and I'm sure you'll get something you deserve. |
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Clark Duncan
Posts : 1746
Age : 29
Hailing From : Taylor Swift's bedroom
Status : My spirit animal's really a pterodactyl.
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game December 30th 2015, 6:19 am | |
| You probably just need to keep your head up and not get too disheartened when things don't go your way. With a bit of confidence and momentum, you're really good at what you do. |
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Venom
Posts : 1514
Age : 27
Hailing From : Your local bar
Status : Pass me a beer
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game December 30th 2015, 12:41 pm | |
| You can start spamming Taylor Swift lyrics in the chat. |
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Lioncross
Showdown
Posts : 623
Age : 31
Status : Team Special Treatment
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game December 30th 2015, 1:08 pm | |
| Spell soccer players' names correctly.
Or, on second thought, spell a few more of them wrong. Wayne Rooty was amazing. |
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Eclipse Diemos
Dynasty
Posts : 1442
Age : 28
Status : Welcome to the Outcast Era
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game December 30th 2015, 2:16 pm | |
| Umm, I think the most basic thing would be trying to push more of your character into your promos. This isn't a critique of your current promos, I just threw this out there because everyone always needs improvement on how they write promos. Even me. |
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Stephanie Matsuda
Empire
Posts : 3092
Age : 39
Hailing From : BK
Status : Back to the drawing board...
| | Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game December 30th 2015, 2:53 pm | |
| Hmm I don't have any strong opinions but since you left the iconomy take advantage of the "grim dark babyface" thing you seem to got going with the whole adams family setup. |
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