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TLA
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyDecember 30th 2015, 4:36 pm

Turn around in your profile pic.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyDecember 30th 2015, 6:35 pm

U r 2perfect4me bb, you don't need to do anything better.

I'd like to see a bit more of the old TLA character at times in your promos, but at the same time I think you dropping all those extra characters was for the better.

I'm pretty sure that was more compliment than advice, fml.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 24th 2016, 4:17 pm

Bump. Can't give a comment since the guy above me is apparently banned
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 24th 2016, 4:26 pm

Just a smidge more confidence is all you need. You're getting your groove back my dear Smile
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Nobi
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 24th 2016, 6:16 pm

There's nothing I can say about you, you are great,lol
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 24th 2016, 8:32 pm

Stop being so nice and let play hear what you dislike about them even if it's a little thing that you could be changed in a second
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 1:03 am

You gotta hit your opponent harder in your promos. I feel like your promos are too soft. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 1:04 am

I honestly don't know maybe stop with the shade throwing all the time?
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 1:05 am

More white babies.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 1:20 am

I feel as though you touch base on subjects without fully exploring them and it's because you get excited by an idea and are quick to abandon it when another exciting idea pops up in your head.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 3:43 am

I feel you should try one time adding scenes to your promos, it would make your already entertaining promos even better.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 3:47 am

This might just be me, but I sometimes lose a sense of your character in your promos at times. It definitely isn't consistent, just a few promos here and there I don't see your character, I more just see "I'm targeting you". I don't know. You're pretty awesome so whatevs.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 3:49 am

Your promos will be more magnificent if you add some connection between your fellow stable members. Joint promos will do work very well to you and your group.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 9:08 am

Alright, you and Azumi asked me to speak my mind and my heart little more, so I apologize if I make a rude statement, lol.

You are a great promoer and all that, and everyone have their own promo style. But you might want to try a "Straight promo type" once in a while, not just doing "Movie promo style" all the time. Then again, you are great, so yes, you can ignore my advise if you want, lol
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 25th 2016, 2:51 pm

You're doing great at giving people feedback. Don't worry, sometimes feedbacks are needed more than just a "You're good" comments.

As for you, you might be needed to expose your opponent even more. You are on a right track so far and I'm impressed with your work. Focus on a few aspects of your opponent and not make a scattered topic in one paragraph to avoid confusion.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 26th 2016, 1:15 pm

Speak better English
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 26th 2016, 4:36 pm

Stop being a fuqboi :]
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 26th 2016, 7:01 pm

Stop being a pip.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyApril 26th 2016, 11:23 pm

More booze in your promo.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyMay 6th 2016, 10:39 pm

Your work is really good. The best thing I can say is I dont believe I see you in the chatroom as much
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyJune 2nd 2016, 8:26 am

You have a very great content on your promo. But I just feel like that there's something missing. I don't know what it is but that might make your work perfect.

....also, resize your damn signature, please!
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyJune 2nd 2016, 9:02 am

Hmm, while you are always a great promoer, I don't think you have clicked yet with your current character.

You told me yesterday you are playing a dark character now, but when I see your promos (especially your newest one againts Azumi) you sounds more like a "loud mouth bastard" rather than a "mysterious individual". I mean you said something like "ZackyPanda is here" or something like that, I don't think those lines suits your current character. 

But hey, it's just me, don't take my words as your map guide. I also need to learn every time I promo
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyJune 2nd 2016, 9:09 am

You are a awsome guy and you promo fine idk but i think you can do a bit better I know you do good in promos but its probably just me but can you do your promos a bit better?
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyJune 2nd 2016, 9:46 am

I'm happy to take your advices man.

Hopefully, no offence taken, your newest promo again Maero is better than ALL of your previous promos but you still need something in your promos. Let's use this line as an example

"Your are going to feel my wrath Mareo you say your are going to end me and calling me a cardboard cut out? Who the fuck are you calling me that? I am Luke Fucking Reign."

If you really want to say something like that, you need to tell people WHO Luke Reign really is. You may want to brag about your past victories. Here's how I would rewrite that sentences.

"You are going to feel my wrath Mareo you say your are going to end me and calling me a cardboard cut out? Who the fuck are you calling me that? I am Luke Fucking Reign. You should take a look at my matches againts El Laberinto and Daniel Marshall. They were good I'll give them that, but in the end of the day, I came out as a better man. What can you do to push me into my limit? What makes you think you are special?"


Also, just an advice for future references. Never consider your opponent as nobodies, it's a lose-lose situation. If you beat "nobody" then so what? No one will cares. You are a Heel, yes you can be arrogant as much as you want, but you also need to elevate your opponent. You have to make people care who you are, who your opponent is, and your matches in general.

Well, it's my 2 cents. I'm sorry if I make a rude statement, but I'm just trying to help you
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 5 EmptyJune 2nd 2016, 12:45 pm

Move to a better country like Mexico.
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