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Lars Grier
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 3rd 2017, 7:04 am

I think the major problem with your promos is that they focus too much on character development. Developing and furthering your character's story is important, but equally as important is the focus on your opponent (s) as well. Advice from another friend of mine said that a good promo is a mix between character development and attacking your opponent. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 3rd 2017, 10:42 am

Become athletic yet destructive
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ThatChapChristo
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 3rd 2017, 10:45 am

Go back to using Mike Bennett, sorry had to be said.
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『zakkii』
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 3rd 2017, 10:56 am

Come to chat and go talk with other member.... or maybe get a good looking sig, I think.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 3rd 2017, 11:26 am

坂崎ハルナ wrote:
Come to chat and go talk with other member.... or maybe get a good looking sig, I think.
I've been hunting for a sig for a while actually....

Anyway only thing I can think of is to keep on top of your promos because most of them are excellent but some seem rushed at times.
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Sir Killian Charlamagne
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 3rd 2017, 1:18 pm

Although I feel as if Marion Fontaine or Aiden English would have been the better fits for Mortimer Gotch, I can at least see where you are coming from with the character. 

Though otherwise, try your best to referain from realism.
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Mei-chan
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 1:16 pm

You doing great job at the promo page. Just need to step up to get more recognition in your brand. You are already a considerably one of the best New Breed in Dynasty.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 1:19 pm

You give me too many boners, stop.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 1:21 pm

Listen to less rap and more rock
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 1:36 pm

Make this year your bitch lol
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 2:00 pm

Be more shady, it would be adorable.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 3:22 pm

Stop changing pic bases lol
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 3:59 pm

Change your name.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 5:02 pm

Don't think you should start calling yourself King so early
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 5:33 pm

Don't bring up your losing streak in promos. And also don't admit to things like not being able to finish matches. That's where Ryan gets you in the promos, man.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 5th 2017, 9:46 pm

You done great so far, mate.... I heard you were here before so please stay longer than you were before.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 7th 2017, 3:45 pm

Nothing to change. I'm a fan of your work. Keep up the creativity and activity please.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 7th 2017, 4:12 pm

You're doing pretty good honestly, I hope this open challenge pans out
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 7th 2017, 4:55 pm

I think you need an Aiden English. Or be Aiden. 
I find Simon a little bit under Aiden.
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Agustin Gates

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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 7th 2017, 9:37 pm

Your new pic base is going to take a while for me to get use to, but your writing is splendid.
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Sir Killian Charlamagne
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 7th 2017, 10:27 pm

I still feel as if ACH or Monty Brown would be a better fit than Byron Saxton. Otherwise, honestly, great character.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 8th 2017, 4:34 am

I'd recommend taking down you win loss record from your sig, but thats just my opinion
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 8th 2017, 4:57 am

Sig is a little obnoxious in length imo.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 8th 2017, 5:47 am

I would like to see you write Finnegan more naturally in your promos.
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PostSubject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game   "What can I do better?" Game - Page 7 EmptyJanuary 8th 2017, 5:57 am

I don't think you need to say "from the bottom" anymore but do what you want to do, lol.

Otherwise, I'm a fan of your promos, lol.
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