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Lars Grier Voltage
Posts : 867 Age : 20 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 3rd 2017, 7:04 am | |
| I think the major problem with your promos is that they focus too much on character development. Developing and furthering your character's story is important, but equally as important is the focus on your opponent (s) as well. Advice from another friend of mine said that a good promo is a mix between character development and attacking your opponent. |
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Mike Showman Voltage
Posts : 966 Age : 26 Hailing From : Queens, New York Status : Life is full of opportunities
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 3rd 2017, 10:42 am | |
| Become athletic yet destructive |
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ThatChapChristo Dynasty
Posts : 864 Age : 28 Hailing From : Buffalo NY Status : Okay.....3,2,1...Let's Jam!
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 3rd 2017, 10:45 am | |
| Go back to using Mike Bennett, sorry had to be said. |
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『zakkii』 Empire
Posts : 6357 Age : 31 Hailing From : WKWKWK Land Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 3rd 2017, 10:56 am | |
| Come to chat and go talk with other member.... or maybe get a good looking sig, I think. |
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ThatChapChristo Dynasty
Posts : 864 Age : 28 Hailing From : Buffalo NY Status : Okay.....3,2,1...Let's Jam!
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 3rd 2017, 11:26 am | |
| - 坂崎ハルナ wrote:
- Come to chat and go talk with other member.... or maybe get a good looking sig, I think.
I've been hunting for a sig for a while actually.... Anyway only thing I can think of is to keep on top of your promos because most of them are excellent but some seem rushed at times. |
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Sir Killian Charlamagne Dynasty
Posts : 1660 Age : 26 Hailing From : Camelot, Ontario, Canada Status : DEUS VULT!
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 3rd 2017, 1:18 pm | |
| Although I feel as if Marion Fontaine or Aiden English would have been the better fits for Mortimer Gotch, I can at least see where you are coming from with the character.
Though otherwise, try your best to referain from realism. |
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Mei-chan Empire
Posts : 54 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 1:16 pm | |
| You doing great job at the promo page. Just need to step up to get more recognition in your brand. You are already a considerably one of the best New Breed in Dynasty. |
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Mr. DEDEDE EAW Hall of Famer
Posts : 3518 Age : 33 Hailing From : The Gay Meat Community Status : #LoveWins
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 1:19 pm | |
| You give me too many boners, stop. |
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LVCIAN
Posts : 5167 Age : 28 Hailing From : THE PRAIRIE STATE Status : I'm not your fucking prey.
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 1:21 pm | |
| Listen to less rap and more rock |
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showster26 Dynasty
Posts : 1988 Age : 35 Hailing From : The Great State Of California Status : #HardWork
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 1:36 pm | |
| Make this year your bitch lol |
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вrσdч spαrks . Empire
Posts : 1634 Age : 29 Hailing From : Brockton ✈ Seattle Status : ís єvíl sσmєthíng чσu αrє? σr ís ít sσmєthíng чσu dσ?
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 2:00 pm | |
| Be more shady, it would be adorable. |
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Bloody Jack EAW Hall of Famer
Posts : 1857 Age : 38 Hailing From : USA Status : Blood thirsty!
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 3:22 pm | |
| Stop changing pic bases lol |
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Anthony Leonhart Voltage
Posts : 1818 Age : 32 Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 3:59 pm | |
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Bhris Elite Voltage
Posts : 2052 Age : 27 Status : #FRA
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 5:02 pm | |
| Don't think you should start calling yourself King so early |
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Amani Empire
Posts : 821 Age : 25 Hailing From : Chiraq
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 5:33 pm | |
| Don't bring up your losing streak in promos. And also don't admit to things like not being able to finish matches. That's where Ryan gets you in the promos, man. |
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『zakkii』 Empire
Posts : 6357 Age : 31 Hailing From : WKWKWK Land Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 5th 2017, 9:46 pm | |
| You done great so far, mate.... I heard you were here before so please stay longer than you were before. |
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Agustin Gates
Posts : 172 Age : 34 Hailing From : Bronx, NY
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 7th 2017, 3:45 pm | |
| Nothing to change. I'm a fan of your work. Keep up the creativity and activity please. |
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ThatChapChristo Dynasty
Posts : 864 Age : 28 Hailing From : Buffalo NY Status : Okay.....3,2,1...Let's Jam!
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 7th 2017, 4:12 pm | |
| You're doing pretty good honestly, I hope this open challenge pans out |
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Anthony Leonhart Voltage
Posts : 1818 Age : 32 Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 7th 2017, 4:55 pm | |
| I think you need an Aiden English. Or be Aiden. I find Simon a little bit under Aiden. |
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Agustin Gates
Posts : 172 Age : 34 Hailing From : Bronx, NY
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 7th 2017, 9:37 pm | |
| Your new pic base is going to take a while for me to get use to, but your writing is splendid. |
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Sir Killian Charlamagne Dynasty
Posts : 1660 Age : 26 Hailing From : Camelot, Ontario, Canada Status : DEUS VULT!
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 7th 2017, 10:27 pm | |
| I still feel as if ACH or Monty Brown would be a better fit than Byron Saxton. Otherwise, honestly, great character. |
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showster26 Dynasty
Posts : 1988 Age : 35 Hailing From : The Great State Of California Status : #HardWork
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 8th 2017, 4:34 am | |
| I'd recommend taking down you win loss record from your sig, but thats just my opinion |
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Finnegan Wakefield Voltage
Posts : 1731 Age : 28 Hailing From : Great Britain (actually Australia) Status : A pretty top bloke, yeah?
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 8th 2017, 4:57 am | |
| Sig is a little obnoxious in length imo. |
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True American Tragedy
Posts : 547 Age : 35 Hailing From : Jacksonville, Florida Status : Fuck this.
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 8th 2017, 5:47 am | |
| I would like to see you write Finnegan more naturally in your promos. |
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Nobi Showdown
Posts : 2134 Age : 30 Hailing From : Indonesia
| Subject: Re: "What can I do better?" Game January 8th 2017, 5:57 am | |
| I don't think you need to say "from the bottom" anymore but do what you want to do, lol.
Otherwise, I'm a fan of your promos, lol. |
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