If you guys could I would love some feedback for my last promo (RP) so that I can write better and better in the future. Thanks in advance.

Since you are a freshman in the extreme school, we will give you the green light on this one. However, these forums, no offense, tend to be perturbing to some of the people here because of how frequent it pops up, so if you really want to get the proper feedback, stop by at the chat and just PC anyone who is willing to read. I am sure that with the amount of people that show up at the chat, at least one of them will say yes

Luckily, I managed to read your promo for the Triple Threat, and I am guessing you have e-fedded before. It's a good promo, in summary, just try to not end your topics of discussion so quickly, especially in the introduction. You started off well by mentioning how a triple threat match works, how it is only one man for himself, but you completely transitioned out of nowhere to a different topic. Just try to elaborate a bit more, and off you go.