Just something I did for fun. Opinions and feedback welcome.

yawn

Stark wrote:

yawn

kys

That's a good poster. I like it TBH (H).

It's trash sis

Astraea better

I actually like this! Not sure how I feel about the names on the back although, I get the purpose of having them. Also, the U in doubt looks strange to me. Still, I love the concept! c:

It's a great concept and effort. That font is really not doing it for me tho.

Scott Diamond wrote:

It's a great concept and effort. That font is really not doing it for me tho.

Pretty much this.... if you can go with a much simpler font, I think it would be even better.

Big thing that would improve this is just focusing more on the type.

The logo font choice isn't a bad choice but I think the spacing is a little too much between lettering. Having each letter run onto each other (without being so close that they overlap too much) would look nice and the Japanese style type works well for that. It's also better to have a plain, white logo instead of making it dark with the white glow. Glow on text doesn't really work the best of times and for a logo, it's not something that's something that should be avoided.

And the other type, the information. Creating a poster is to present the right information in the right manner and audiences are different. But for us E-Fedders, we have two bits of information to know: the event name and the date. When it comes to the information below the logo, the date needs to be what my eye is drawn to. Bump the logo up and give a little more space to the location and date. I would also suggest using a clean, simple front family that has a variety of different weights instead of something more decorative. Make the date nice a bold, the location thinner etc.

Otherwise, it's a very nice piece and you did a solid job on the tattoos on Ares' back.