I did honestly steal this from Mister McAdams but I figure it'll help considering I lost (again) for those of you that read my promo what could I improve on? What would you care to see? etc. Etc.

Because honestly I feel this character isn't working so far (And I really don't want to have to turn heel)

Honestly, I think you are doing fine. I'd stick with the character. You are creative with the language and you bring something a little bit different from everyone else so that helps you stand out. You've had a tough couple of weeks against pretty established guys; Marx for instance is competing for a world title shot this week, but if you stick with it I'm sure things will turn around. 

Just put in a few more shifts and keep at it, it will only get better.

Let's hope huh? Because the feeling of dropping the ball sucks just a tad.

Bump.