I think if you took longer in your promos and let the personality shine through a bit more, that could help a lot.  It feels like they are a bit rushed sometimes.

Normally what I would have told you was increase the length of your paragraphs in your promos, but ypu have been doing that. All I'd say now is don't stop, if you kerp at your current rate, you can only get better.

Yo last promo was only one sentence long. You should try to write more than that.

Give me more off those old TLA Porn Parodies. I DON'T KNOW WHY.

more Azuna scene <3

well, seriously. as Rami said. just put less inside terms and maybe some finisher names too. I don't know, it sounds stupid if someone mentioned any finisher name in the promos. Sorry, bae, don't hurt me... I mean, hurt me.... uhh, I mean. don't.

I'd actually like to see you try your hand at a cinematic promo. Not that I don't like your current style of promos, I do, but I want to see what it would look like.

cut more promos like that last one

@Eclipse HOW MANY TIMES WILL YOU TRY TO MURDER PEOPLE? IT'S A BAD THING TO MURDER!!!!!!

@Nas Now that BB is "Injured" get her involved like you had me involved in one your promos for the massive six man match

Watch out for punctuation. I know this might seem like a totally crappy advice, but well, I have read literally two of your promos so far (hey I'm new, still trying to catch up and stuff), and both times, I got this sensation of... Well, of a lot of words crammed together, before that merciful full stop finally came. A couple more commas here and there, to break the pace of the thing a little bit, would have helped it feel a bit lighter... Or at least I think so. I am used to Italian tho, which uses a lot more punctuation than English on average, so yeah, I might be slightly biased on this one.

The preceeding post was why I want Oxford Kama to be an emoticon here

I think you show a lot of potential, and I like how you fit your character into your promos. For advice, I would say stick to the kind of style you had in your first promo, where it was longer and had some more description in it. Your more recent promo I think lacked depth, though that was probably because of the interview style you went with. Include more depth, is what I would say, kinda like you did in your first and second promos. Also keep making those almost OOC comments, as I think they add a bit more of a uniqueness to your promos, but don't go overboard with them as you don't want to digress from your main promo points too much.

Personally I would like to see those Gifs used in more off a reserved manners. Make them special when they are used. 

But actually just keep doing what you're great at and you'll be a star in no time.