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showster26
Dynasty
Posts : 1988
Age : 35
Hailing From : The Great State Of California
Status : #HardWork
 |  Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 11th 2016, 3:42 am | |
| Like: I really like how you have really gelled well with Jon on your last few promos, and the use of images, and color help your work to stand out slightly.
dislike: The Show Talk is a horrible name, please rectify this in the future lol. |
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Azumi Goto
Empire
Posts : 3679
Age : 26
Hailing From : Orlando, Florida
Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 11th 2016, 6:51 am | |
| Like: How different you make both Caine and Michaels feel from one another not just gimmick wise but beyond that.
Dislike: I actually have nothing but small nitpicks |
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Anthony Leonhart
Voltage
Posts : 1818
Age : 32
Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy
Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 11th 2016, 6:54 am | |
| Like : Your long long promos with all of these details, dammit long read but good shit. Dayum.
Dislike : // |
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Lars Grier
Voltage
Posts : 867
Age : 20
Hailing From : Places
Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 12:38 am | |
| Like: Your guy really is great. I like how you play up to your gimmick, "The King With an Iron Fist". It'll be fun reading your promos for the awards show.
Dislike: None so far. |
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Azumi Goto
Empire
Posts : 3679
Age : 26
Hailing From : Orlando, Florida
Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 2:02 am | |
| Like: You've successfully become a monster heel that EAW really doesn't have IMO. You write your character really well with that fact
Dislike: I actually don't have anything... |
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Nasir Escobar
Dynasty
Posts : 3316
Age : 27
Hailing From : Brick City BITCH~!
Status : If you don’t like your destiny, don’t accept it. Instead, have the courage to change it the way you want it to be~!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 2:05 am | |
| Like: Your promos have improved vastly in terms of quality and length since I first returned
Dislike: I noticed that you are starting to stick with a format now, but make sure to keep the formula that you are using now and don't alter it again. It works for you and is bringing you much success. |
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Bhris Elite
Voltage
Posts : 2052
Age : 27
Status : #FRA
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 2:07 am | |
| Like: Do a great job presenting the character
Dislike: Nothing really to be honest. |
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Lars Grier
Voltage
Posts : 867
Age : 20
Hailing From : Places
Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 6:48 pm | |
| Like: Your promos really represent your face underdog character. It's fun reading them!
Dislike: There are a few spelling issues, but that's not that big. I think you need to work on your length, so you can create better promos. |
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Terry Chambers
Posts : 504
Age : 33
Status : End of the Line
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 6:52 pm | |
| Like: The scenes and nice job representing your character.
Dislike: Nothing yet. |
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Anthony Leonhart
Voltage
Posts : 1818
Age : 32
Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy
Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 7:09 pm | |
| Like : The impact you gave them. I mean like a Batista/Goldberg spear. IN DA FACE.
Dislike : // |
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Agustin Gates
Posts : 172
Age : 34
Hailing From : Bronx, NY
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 7:22 pm | |
| Like: The intensity and passion.
Dislike: I want more. |
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Jon McAdams
Voltage
Posts : 516
Age : 35
Hailing From : England, United Kingdoms
Status : Trying to be a better man...
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 20th 2016, 11:03 pm | |
| Like: that you have the balls to use. Byron Saxton
Dislike: that you are using Byron Saxton.
No, but for real
Like: that you're actually making him work. It's impressive to me that you're using such a universally hated pic base and taking it completely seriously and using it so well
Dislike: still that you're using Byron saxton |
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Agustin Gates
Posts : 172
Age : 34
Hailing From : Bronx, NY
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 21st 2016, 1:28 pm | |
| Like: Very sophisticated promoer.
Dislike: Maybe the GFX you use for your promos. I think someone would be happy to make one for you. Sorry. |
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Terry Chambers
Posts : 504
Age : 33
Status : End of the Line
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 21st 2016, 8:16 pm | |
| (Haven't read enough promos from you yet)
Like: Making Byron work.
Dislike: Your avatar to be honest. |
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showster26
Dynasty
Posts : 1988
Age : 35
Hailing From : The Great State Of California
Status : #HardWork
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 22nd 2016, 5:11 am | |
| Like: that you actually try to make a scene in your promos.
Dislike: I feel they could be laid out better when describing the action like which words and even when to and tell us what we a actions terry is preforming |
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Lars Grier
Voltage
Posts : 867
Age : 20
Hailing From : Places
Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) December 22nd 2016, 5:33 am | |
| Like: Very well written. I like creepy occult characters, and IMO Caine is your best character.
Dislike: None |
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True American Tragedy
Posts : 547
Age : 35
Hailing From : Jacksonville, Florida
Status : Fuck this.
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) January 11th 2017, 9:39 am | |
| Like: Your ability to develop your character
Dislike: I'm not sure why but I feel like Lars deserves more than just one nickname to use in promos. |
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Nobi
Showdown
Posts : 2134
Age : 30
Hailing From : Indonesia
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) January 11th 2017, 2:02 pm | |
| Like: Your choise of the words and the way you play your character. You are obviously in the good store. Also it's cool to see that you are using camera stuffs, lol.
Dislike: Like I said in another thread, I don't think you need to say "from the bottom" anymore but just do what you want to do, I'm not forcing you, lol. Other than that, I don't have anything to dislike, lol. |
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Azumi Goto
Empire
Posts : 3679
Age : 26
Hailing From : Orlando, Florida
Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) January 11th 2017, 2:53 pm | |
| Like: Your length and quality are vastly improving since PFP, you're showing your real characteristics of someone that has a great amount of potential to be the one of the top, if not THE top babyface of EAW.
Dislike: It's just little nitpicks and that's it from me, nothing to huge enough to talk about. |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 31
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) January 26th 2017, 9:18 pm | |
| Like: as you always said to me that the reason your promos are so short because you want to make it as efficient as possible so there will be no repetition and redundancy between one another. And I do appreciate those reasons.
Dislike: if I don't know the reason, maybe your length is the most problem but everything is fine now. |
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Bloody Jack
EAW Hall of Famer
Posts : 1857
Age : 38
Hailing From : USA
Status : Blood thirsty!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) January 26th 2017, 9:52 pm | |
| Like: How you always seem to blend story and promo elements together perfectly that each compliments the other
Dislike: Nothing in particular |
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showster26
Dynasty
Posts : 1988
Age : 35
Hailing From : The Great State Of California
Status : #HardWork
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) January 27th 2017, 4:15 pm | |
| Like: your use of settings and secondary characters to flesh out promos. It really breaths some life into them.
Dislike: you sound a bit like that lame Solomon Caine dude. Lmao just kidding |
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Azumi Goto
Empire
Posts : 3679
Age : 26
Hailing From : Orlando, Florida
Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 5th 2017, 12:36 pm | |
| Like: Both of your characters are really well written. The Dark Personality of Caine is really shining through and Mark Michaels has a great personality that has a championship reign in his character.
Dislike: Odd nitpicks and that's really it. |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 31
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) June 13th 2017, 4:50 pm | |
| Like: pretty much on point, not going to some unnecessary topic and straight on striking your opponent.
Dislike: Repetition. I always notice you always mention your nickname in every promos and the reader might be thinking "yeah, I know you are that, you keep saying it" |
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Anthony Leonhart
Voltage
Posts : 1818
Age : 32
Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy
Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) June 14th 2017, 2:30 am | |
| Like : The format of your promos. Like we know that Haruna do image, 3/4 big paragraphs and boom and with colors. That's simple but effective.
Dislike : Erm...nothing. |
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