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Bhris Elite
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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Jun - 17:04

Like: How you portray your character 

Dislike: The whole hear me roar thing is pretty cringe.   Also the Goku Gif maybe use another character that makes for you or something idk.






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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Jun - 17:14

Feedback below is all based from your latest promo.

Like: The dialogue between Elite and Mike. I like that Elite's promos aren't 100% in-your-face seriousness and provide readers with a comical read. Love the Lucas Johnson roasts tbh.

Dislike: The formatting, mainly because I noticed that you double spaced after every period (but really that's just a nitpick of mine). Grammar could also use a bit of work. Other than that, no complaints on my end.



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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Jun - 18:08

Like: Your vocabulary is splendid, and I love your flow as well. I thought you were new and was really impressed with how well your promos were put together, then I found out you'd been here before but doesnt take away from it, good stuff mate. Also great pic base

Dislike: it plays into your character so its not so big deal and nicknames only mean so much but never been a fan of the "devil" bits. but again, not much for me to look into there.

EDIT: By devil bits, I mean, people using it as nicknames


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Thu 15 Jun - 0:20

Like: Your promos are differents. I'm not so sure how to describe it, but I suppose you are a different gentleman. Yes, your promos are fun to read (H).

Dislike: Nothing for now, lol.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Tue 13 Feb - 4:02

Like: you really are embracing your face persona perfectly, really understanding what you're doing in your promo and able to manage the respectful personality but still striking your opponent very well.

Dislike: not for this char tho.... but the other one, Shark Man. Something is bothering me and that is lacking originality.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Tue 13 Feb - 7:44

Like: Your promos genuinely feel like another chapter in a long book, and I admire your continuity week after week. You're someone who can repackage your character and make her feel different with each gimmick change. I love that you went back to your roots with Zakkii, the way you sell her as a face is amazing.

Dislike: Honestly, I've got nothing. Keep up the good work, Haruna!


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Tue 13 Feb - 9:43

Like: Your work is exceptionally consistent, every character you've done has had their own feel to them that makes. 

dislike: tbh I've got nothing.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Tue 13 Feb - 17:03

Like: I like your wording, the style and how I can visualize the message of your promos.

Dislike: To be fair? Nothing. No promo is perfect but to say I dislike something? Nah.



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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Tue 13 Feb - 18:21

Like: people give you alotta shit Ryan, but honestly you character's been consistent and spot on. Sure it's not gonna win every match, and they're not there to be the most efficent at securing yourself over your opponent, but it fits your character like hell, and helps to tell the story your trying to have fun with. 

Dislike: eh, like you said, nothing really to hate. Sure you're a troll on the feed, but that's part of the gimmick. Sure you won't win every match with your promo and character style, but that's not the point. So tl;dr, Nothing I really dislike.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Tue 13 Feb - 23:10

Like: The Revenant character is really one of the more intriguing ones on Voltage to follow. I can feel the intensity from him, and the added usage of bold and italics to emphasize is a nice touch. Honestly, I think you're gonna be good to get the New Breed title with this kind of quality.

Dislike: More of a nitpick but could ya tone it down with the swearing? Unless that's part of your character. Just a nitpick, aside from that I dislike nothing else.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Feb - 13:20

Like: Your promise are really well done, your character motives are done well and shown all the time during a promo battle. You know how to hit your opponent's character when it comes to verbal jabs

Dislike: RED FONT!!


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Feb - 13:27

Like: It's not hard to see how much you've improved from the first promo that you dropped all the way back when you joined. I feel like there's something waiting in the future for you and if you continue making the same strides I have no doubts that you'll get there.

Dislike: Grammar. It's the one thing that I see holding you back from where you could be to where you are now.
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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Feb - 13:44

Like: Almost everything about your promos, really. It's not too long that you'll get bored reading, keeping you engaged, and the character of Theron is one of the best I've seen in a while. You have such a good grasp on him and you are really able to convey his desire to win and be successful - and with work like that it's no wonder you've been able to achieve so much. Still a hope for me that one day I'll face you again, or have a rivalry.

Dislike: Sometimes you don't promo Nothing.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Feb - 14:17

Like: Your improvement. You play the role of an edgelord quite well, and there's a reason why you're one of the top talents Voltage has to offer. Haven't been following the male brands that much lately, but whenever I do, I like to read your stuff. Lars' story is pretty consistent, and for me, that's all I can ask for out of a character. The format is simple yet effective, heh.

Dislike: Ryan Marx, is that you? In all seriousness, the way you format things can be a bit...meh. Huge blocks of text have never been my cup of tea, and separating your points into individual paragraphs wouldn't hurt. Stylistically, you tend to on tangents, reduce that shit fam.


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PostSubject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition)   Wed 14 Feb - 14:36

Like: since Jael is the only active char you play currently, I think I might give you comment about it instead. But in general, I always love the visual aspect in your promos to grab the reader's attention to stop by and read your promos. And from the experience of fighting you, I really like the gimmick and the characteristics of her that you portray really well.

Dislike: Not really sure and I can't see the reason to all this, but what's with the almost same formatting as Marx's alt's promos?


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