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Bhris Elite Voltage


Posts : 2059 Age : 22 Status : #FRA
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) June 14th 2017, 3:04 am | |
| Like: How you portray your character
Dislike: The whole hear me roar thing is pretty cringe. Also the Goku Gif maybe use another character that makes for you or something idk. |
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Harvey Yorke Voltage


Posts : 111 Age : 22 Hailing From : The Underground Status : To Hell and back...and back again.
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Jon McAdams Voltage


Posts : 516 Age : 30 Hailing From : England, United Kingdoms Status : Trying to be a better man...
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) June 14th 2017, 4:08 am | |
| Like: Your vocabulary is splendid, and I love your flow as well. I thought you were new and was really impressed with how well your promos were put together, then I found out you'd been here before but doesnt take away from it, good stuff mate. Also great pic base
Dislike: it plays into your character so its not so big deal and nicknames only mean so much but never been a fan of the "devil" bits. but again, not much for me to look into there.
EDIT: By devil bits, I mean, people using it as nicknames  Special thanks to Harvey Yorke for this sig! :O Achievements Current Hardcore Champion 3/3/2018 2x Hardcore Champion 1 Successful Title Defense Rising star of the week Promoer of the week (with others at Shock Value top prospect match 2 x Beef of the week (with Amadeus, With Finnegan Wakefiled) |
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Nobi Showdown


Posts : 2138 Age : 25 Hailing From : Indonesia
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) June 14th 2017, 10:20 am | |
| Like: Your promos are differents. I'm not so sure how to describe it, but I suppose you are a different gentleman. Yes, your promos are fun to read (H).
Dislike: Nothing for now, lol.  (Thank You Lars Grier) (Thank You Rhyse) |
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『zakkii』 Empire


Posts : 6363 Age : 26 Hailing From : WKWKWK Land Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 12th 2018, 12:02 pm | |
| Like: you really are embracing your face persona perfectly, really understanding what you're doing in your promo and able to manage the respectful personality but still striking your opponent very well.
Dislike: not for this char tho.... but the other one, Shark Man. Something is bothering me and that is lacking originality. |
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Rhyse

Posts : 281 Age : 20 Status : Level ya pussy up.
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 12th 2018, 3:44 pm | |
| Like: Your promos genuinely feel like another chapter in a long book, and I admire your continuity week after week. You're someone who can repackage your character and make her feel different with each gimmick change. I love that you went back to your roots with Zakkii, the way you sell her as a face is amazing.
Dislike: Honestly, I've got nothing. Keep up the good work, Haruna! |
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Azumi Goto Empire


Posts : 3687 Age : 21 Hailing From : Orlando, Florida Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 12th 2018, 5:43 pm | |
| Like: Your work is exceptionally consistent, every character you've done has had their own feel to them that makes.
dislike: tbh I've got nothing. |
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Ryan Wilson

Posts : 772 Hailing From : Montreal, Quebec, Canada Status : Happy! Entering a new land of opportunity.
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 1:03 am | |
| Like: I like your wording, the style and how I can visualize the message of your promos.
Dislike: To be fair? Nothing. No promo is perfect but to say I dislike something? Nah.   Out Of Character this awesome piece of art is brought to you by Lars Grier! THANK YOU MAN! I won't say it enough. ^^ |
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The Revenant

Posts : 263 Age : 18 Hailing From : Chicago, Illinois Status : Yar Har Fiddly Dee, You are a Pirate
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 2:21 am | |
| Like: people give you alotta shit Ryan, but honestly you character's been consistent and spot on. Sure it's not gonna win every match, and they're not there to be the most efficent at securing yourself over your opponent, but it fits your character like hell, and helps to tell the story your trying to have fun with.
Dislike: eh, like you said, nothing really to hate. Sure you're a troll on the feed, but that's part of the gimmick. Sure you won't win every match with your promo and character style, but that's not the point. So tl;dr, Nothing I really dislike.  
(Thanks for the Sig Rhyse) |
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Lars Grier Voltage


Posts : 867 Age : 15 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 7:10 am | |
| Like: The Revenant character is really one of the more intriguing ones on Voltage to follow. I can feel the intensity from him, and the added usage of bold and italics to emphasize is a nice touch. Honestly, I think you're gonna be good to get the New Breed title with this kind of quality.
Dislike: More of a nitpick but could ya tone it down with the swearing? Unless that's part of your character. Just a nitpick, aside from that I dislike nothing else.  - Old sigs:
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(Signature created by me; if you want to request for one, PM me)  (Signature by the legendary Harvey Yorke)
CHAMPIONSHIPS/ACCOLADES: 1x Most Valuable Elitist
2x Promoer of the Week 3x Rising Star of the Week (Check out Lars' wikia page here!) |
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Azumi Goto Empire


Posts : 3687 Age : 21 Hailing From : Orlando, Florida Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 9:20 pm | |
| Like: Your promise are really well done, your character motives are done well and shown all the time during a promo battle. You know how to hit your opponent's character when it comes to verbal jabs
Dislike: RED FONT!! |
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Theron Nikolas Showdown


Posts : 166 Age : 23 Hailing From : Edmonton, Alberta, Canada Status : I'm just a man; one that just simply keeps his word.
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 9:27 pm | |
| Like: It's not hard to see how much you've improved from the first promo that you dropped all the way back when you joined. I feel like there's something waiting in the future for you and if you continue making the same strides I have no doubts that you'll get there.
Dislike: Grammar. It's the one thing that I see holding you back from where you could be to where you are now. |
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Lars Grier Voltage


Posts : 867 Age : 15 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 9:44 pm | |
| Like: Almost everything about your promos, really. It's not too long that you'll get bored reading, keeping you engaged, and the character of Theron is one of the best I've seen in a while. You have such a good grasp on him and you are really able to convey his desire to win and be successful - and with work like that it's no wonder you've been able to achieve so much. Still a hope for me that one day I'll face you again, or have a rivalry.
Dislike: Sometimes you don't promo Nothing.  - Old sigs:
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(Signature created by me; if you want to request for one, PM me)  (Signature by the legendary Harvey Yorke)
CHAMPIONSHIPS/ACCOLADES: 1x Most Valuable Elitist
2x Promoer of the Week 3x Rising Star of the Week (Check out Lars' wikia page here!) |
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Rhyse

Posts : 281 Age : 20 Status : Level ya pussy up.
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 10:17 pm | |
| Like: Your improvement. You play the role of an edgelord quite well, and there's a reason why you're one of the top talents Voltage has to offer. Haven't been following the male brands that much lately, but whenever I do, I like to read your stuff. Lars' story is pretty consistent, and for me, that's all I can ask for out of a character. The format is simple yet effective, heh.
Dislike: Ryan Marx, is that you? In all seriousness, the way you format things can be a bit...meh. Huge blocks of text have never been my cup of tea, and separating your points into individual paragraphs wouldn't hurt. Stylistically, you tend to on tangents, reduce that shit fam. |
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『zakkii』 Empire


Posts : 6363 Age : 26 Hailing From : WKWKWK Land Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
 | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) February 13th 2018, 10:36 pm | |
| Like: since Jael is the only active char you play currently, I think I might give you comment about it instead. But in general, I always love the visual aspect in your promos to grab the reader's attention to stop by and read your promos. And from the experience of fighting you, I really like the gimmick and the characteristics of her that you portray really well.
Dislike: Not really sure and I can't see the reason to all this, but what's with the almost same formatting as Marx's alt's promos? |
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