Like: I love how you are very meticulous in your work in regards to knowing your opponent's strengths and weaknesses, you also convict your weaknesses as well which provides a character that is much more relatable than others.

Dislike: Your new picbase is so brash, naughty and fun that I wish you would bring some of that stuff to your character, a more outspoken arrogant character could work with the change.

Like: For one you're an great promoer which you already know that. But what I like about your promos is that you're really good at fleshing out your character to the point that we know what makes you tick etc. On top of that you have a quality that some people here don't have and that's bringing out the best within anyone you promo against. You give them so much material that they can use against you. My favorite promo battle was that match against you and Pizza Boy, which to me was probably the standard on what people should follow. You're able to keep your promos fresh and it never seems repetitive. So good job chap in that department. 

Dislike: You're just too good  lol jk but seriously I can't really think of anything that I dislike. But I would like to see a different presentation in your promos with your new gimmick or something that shows emphasis with your nickname or something. But that's just me nitpicking :p you're still great regardless

Like:  It's refreshing to see a character who is a baby face who does not think he's the best, he just wants to do a good job.  I dig that.  Your character has a plucky underdog vibe.

Dislike:  You get a few run on sentences.  A trick is to read your promo out loud, and you will catch them in cases where you are running out of breath, or if something does not feel right.

Like: I like your simple presentation and the damage to your opponent is pretty much good.

Dislike: Again, simple is being too simple sometimes but that's not a problem. You are a veteran in this thing so you must be know exactly what to do.

Like: I love how you're incredibly detailed and creative when it comes to your promos. I appreciate the fact that you're not just a "lets get to the point" type of gal. You love to tell a story within your story and that's so important for character development. I feel like some people rely on their "name" so to speak, when it comes to cutting a promo and spare all of the necessary details and don't really go into depth as to how their character is feeling and their state of mind. You, on the other hand, are the complete opposite. I always appreciate your work and I'm a huge Haruna fan! 

Dislike: I guess the grammar errors every now and then are something that I dislike. But I know that's inevitable in your case so it's not that big of a deal. Nothing but improvements from here on out!

Like: Your character gives that 'heel who's actions are justifiable' vibes and it transitions well into your promos

Dislike: Nothing really

Like: You've definitely made a conscious effort to improve and you've really come into your own lately. You convey everything your character seems to be feeling pretty well (feeling kinda emotional coming out of Pain for Pride, standing on your own after the split with Erica, etc.).

Dislike: It's mostly grammar-related stuff, I guess? Spelling, punctuation, all that. And it's true that length of promos isn't everything, and while yours aren't as short as they once were, I think they could still be a little longer.

like: promos stay lit
dislike: nothing cause you lit

Like: Your promo is a magnet who pulled people to read it and no one can get away with those while people scrolling away.

Dislike: maybe the font is too small. that's about it. the content is no problem, I guess.

Like: I love the way you execute your promos. You are very clear to tell who your character is. Not only that, your cinematic promo style is a top notch IMO, just keep it up.

Dislike: Like I said to Haruna, red colour background (for showing Rattik's activity) kinda annoyed me, but it's not a big deal. Feel free to keep using it if you really like it haha

Like: I like how you're badass and funny at the same time. I think all of your opponents make a visit to the burn unit after each of your promos. I also like how you use everything that's thrown at you. You can adapt to any way your character is being built.

Dislike: I wish your promos were longer and I think you need to find your style. Just make your promos more yours and don't make them sound as much like they were written by someone else. I like your style, I just think it needs to be more overt.

Like: You know your character very well and have a nice blend of eeriness with the funny stuff.

Dislike: Kinda wish you stuck to the darker stuff tbh tho, the funny bit is my shtick

like: You've been able to blend your character very well from what it was as the Nas to what it is now. It's not a stark contrast by any means but you can tell the difference and you know what you are doing with it.

Dislike: I do kindof miss The Nas honestly. The joy of imagining the things you say as your character is fantastic.

Like: Your promos are fantastically creepy, and the change to Bray Wyatt ages ago reallllllllly brought the whole character together. They're long, but not in a boring, self-serving way like many e-fedders tend to do. They're intelligent, and you only really promo when you have something to say. 

Dislike: Again, they're long, but that's more about how lazy I am, and not an actual dislike.

Like: Just about everything including the little GIF's you use in them great stuff fits the promo very well.  I also love the emotion you put into the promos everything is very spot on.


Dislike: Can't really say I dislike anything.

Like: You've got new ideas for days. And I'm a fan of Big Mike as a supporting character. You beat my ass a while back and I learned a lot from you.

Dislike: You beat my ass a while back. That's all I got.

Like: The storytelling aspect you have going on, and how it switches up with each person you include. Like with Cloud it was saving a child from abusive parents for example

Dislike: Every time you use Oz I think of me, even tho you didn't know until now that was my name

Like: Descriptive and creative word choice.  The character really comes alive.  For instance the whole king thing from your last one.  You can drive a point home

Dislike:  Wall of text.  It makes it a bit hard for me to read on a computer screen.  Breaking it up into smaller paragraphs may help the flow a bit.

@Kurt
Like: I like how silly you can be while still being intimidating. You've got some real skill.

Dislike: I think your character traits need to be a bit more overt.

@Aren

Your name is Oz? That's fucking sick dude. Also, I will never think of writing Oz the same way again. Thanks a bunch.

Like: I love reading dark promos. Your titles are always really cool as well.
Dislike: Nothing yet.

Like: You're funny and creative. I like seeing what you post, it's always a pleasure. Also, the text color you use actually makes it easier to read your promos, thanks a fuck ton dude.

Dislike: I wish your promos were a bit longer.

Like: I really love your scene style promos, really lets the audience see the action. I thoroughly enjoy the humor you have intertwined in it.  Really enjoy your character

Dislike: //

Like: You presentation, I think you lay out your promos in a way that makes theme pop out and fun to read, which gets more eyes on the fact that your promos themselves are the bomb.

Dislike: Got nothin right now

Like: You make really detailed and legitimate counter claims to what your opponents have to say. Most people just make claims that what their opponents say isn't true, but you really make me want to get behind your arguments. I also feel that you really do well putting yourself over when you compare yourself to others. Putting your name on the same lines as former world champions allows me to see you as a future world champion.

Dislike: I'm a fan of short sentences for effect, but sometimes your short sentences would be better used as a list with commas. You've got the goods, just needs a little tweak formatting-wise.