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VENTURA.
Posts : 3410
Age : 40
Hailing From : The Underground
Status : Just.....
 |  Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 24th 2016, 11:24 pm | |
| Like: The scenery that you at times tend to introduce in your Promos + the vast improvement of your promoing over the past couple of months.
Dislike: Honestly, I don't dislike anything. You are continuously showing forth improvement each and every time you promo, though I could say that I couldn't understand your debut promo from long ago. |
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Marco
Voltage
Posts : 1863
Age : 30
Hailing From : Lexington, Kentucky
Status : Blah Blah Blah
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 24th 2016, 11:40 pm | |
| Like: Very unique and creative and never dull and boring.
Dislike: The small font and color choice. |
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AJ Perez
Posts : 246
Age : 26
Hailing From : Copenhagen, Denmark
Status : Singing Bobby Roode's Theme Song
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 25th 2016, 12:44 pm | |
| Like: Your promos are medium sized what ch is good for me because i normally dont understand the huge promos.
Dislike: you could maybe use smaller paragraphs or a different font because i sometime get lost while reading. |
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Victor Maero
Dynasty
Posts : 503
Age : 23
Hailing From : Missouri
Status : How many licks does it take to get to the center of my heart?
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 25th 2016, 10:03 pm | |
| Like: I enjoy in the integration of gaming and what is basically a vlog. It's a cool style and I like the change.
Dislike: I fear that you using real characters like Hulk Hogan may be a little bit of a turn off as the EAW characters are the wrestlers of this world. This bit is more of a hope really: I hope your gimmick becomes even MORE defined, it's pretty interesting and I can't wait to see where it goes. |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 32
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 25th 2016, 10:10 pm | |
| Like: despite the dark character of yours, you really build an interesting connection with your NPC. The one that I like the most from your promo.
Dislike: you somehow forgot about how opponent exploited your lacking strike on them. Create less space for them by talking about their weakness over and over. |
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Marco
Voltage
Posts : 1863
Age : 30
Hailing From : Lexington, Kentucky
Status : Blah Blah Blah
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 25th 2016, 10:34 pm | |
| Like: Your presentation is spot on. I love everything about it and when I scroll through the promo page I always stop and take a minuet and read yours because you always manage to grab people's attention.
Dislike: Nothing so far. |
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AJ Perez
Posts : 246
Age : 26
Hailing From : Copenhagen, Denmark
Status : Singing Bobby Roode's Theme Song
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 25th 2016, 10:36 pm | |
| Like: I thought because you normally play a heel you couldnt pull of a face but you have and you did it very well
Dislike: Try to use smaller paragraphs.mi get lost sometimes |
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Anthony Leonhart
Voltage
Posts : 1818
Age : 33
Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy
Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 2:47 pm | |
| Like : The evolution of your character through the promos. Dislike : Try to have a presentation  |
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Bianca Carmichael
Posts : 115
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 3:16 pm | |
| Like: I LOVE they way you portray your character and give him so much life.
Dislike: From what I can tell atleast, you seem to get off track from your opponents a bit. |
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ᴍᴏɴɪᴄᴀ ᴠᴀᴜɢʜᴀɴ .
Posts : 409
Age : 34
Hailing From : MA ✈ TN
Status : fєєlín' vαughαntαstíc !
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 4:03 pm | |
| Like: I like your character in general , the whole "Fyre" play on words is really nice. She's adorable and that comes across and her passion comes across in your promos.
Dislike: I would try to write longer, I know that's not easy, as I'm a lazy ho lol but with time and development with your character and just picking up inspiration from others here, you'll pick up in no time. |
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Anthony Leonhart
Voltage
Posts : 1818
Age : 33
Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy
Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 4:10 pm | |
| Like : Presentation skills and that Carmella pic base adds to your character.
Dislike : // |
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TLA
Voltage
Posts : 3007
Hailing From : Where they ain't want me to be #ThaHall
Status : Bein' a badder hombre than ever before
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 7:04 pm | |
| Like: I think yo character has a lot of potential and I like that you keep trying different things to get a feel for it.
Dislike: Steele rejoined EAW and ur promos didn't stop this from happening. |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 7:28 pm | |
| Like: Best answered with an example...
"TLA blazes up a joint as the crowd of hipsters cheers and throws leaves of kale in the air."
'nough said.
Dislike: Not so sure. You're hilarious. Check. Presentation is good. Check. If I had to nitpick, and I'm clutching at straws here, it peeves me when I notice Spanish words missing accents or particularly ényes (ñ). One of these days someone is going to say ano in place of año and anal-hilarity will ensue. |
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Marco
Voltage
Posts : 1863
Age : 30
Hailing From : Lexington, Kentucky
Status : Blah Blah Blah
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 7:34 pm | |
| Like: You're a great promoer in my opinoin. Out of all the promos I end up reading yours more frequently and I have grown attached to you and your character.
Dislike: There hasn't been anything that I have disliked about your work so far.. |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 32
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 8:42 pm | |
| Like: being a face, being a heel, being an elitist, being a vixen, you are equally great. It has the same style but your personality makes it different.
Dislike: when the first time you sign as Angelo, you are too Tyler Breeze. I think that's the only dislike I can found from you. |
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Nobi
Showdown
Posts : 2134
Age : 30
Hailing From : Indonesia
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 9:27 pm | |
| Like: You're such a versatile promoer. You could be both funny and serious. You could make both "straight-type" promo style and "cinematic" promo style. Albeit it did take you little long to adapt as a Heel (at least for me) you have found your voice again. So just keep it up.
Dislike: Nothing at the moment.....Red colour background kinda annoyed me though, but it's not a big deal, lol. |
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Victor Maero
Dynasty
Posts : 503
Age : 23
Hailing From : Missouri
Status : How many licks does it take to get to the center of my heart?
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 26th 2016, 11:25 pm | |
| Like: You deliver killer burns and have excellent segues. Your gimmick is present and doesn't fade into the background and you've got some damn good ideas. Your outlook on your opponents is refreshing and interesting. When I promod against you you always kept me guessing.
Dislike: I feel like you need a more badass sig, or at least another one. |
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Bhris Elite
Voltage
Posts : 2052
Age : 27
Status : #FRA
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 27th 2016, 2:00 am | |
| Like: Definitely a different type of vibe that I really like. The scenes are great.
Dislike: Nothing really expect for maybe sometimes the spacing even though I should be the last one talking. |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 27th 2016, 2:11 am | |
| Like: I think generally the fact of how much you've improved throughout the entirety of this run; been fantastic to see, pal
Dislike: In all, nothing but a few grammatical errors that I pick up, nothing that really takes away from the quality of the promo, more of a pet peeve of mine. |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 32
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 27th 2016, 2:29 am | |
| Like: your quick responsiveness to reply your opponent promos is a huge point for you.
Dislike: well yeah, you might not be a fan of this but I see nothing too flashy with those to ask people to read your promo. But eh, don't mind it. The content is all that matters. |
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Kurt_Burton
Posts : 221
Age : 41
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 27th 2016, 7:45 am | |
| Like: The storytelling- you are phenomenal at that.
Dislike: OCcasionally storytelling can stray too far from the "promo" side of things. You normally balance it pretty well, but I remember one in pain for pride that seemed weak on the wrestling side.
(I had to think very hard to come up with a dislike. Sorry for the nitpick.) |
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Bloody Jack
EAW Hall of Famer
Posts : 1857
Age : 38
Hailing From : USA
Status : Blood thirsty!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 27th 2016, 1:16 pm | |
| LIKE: What's their to like?! You're a sad, sad clown!
DISLIKE: Uhhhh...EVERYTHING!!! You're a giant tool!
Ok in all seriousness...
LIKE: That you do an excellent blend of both comedy and serious at once. Very hard to pull off.
DISLIKE: That sometimes your promos aren't longer. I need me some more Burton! |
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Azumi Goto
Empire
Posts : 3679
Age : 27
Hailing From : Orlando, Florida
Status : If you fall, be able to stand up on your own. And if you can do that, you're Unbreakable!
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 27th 2016, 2:40 pm | |
| Like: The promo feels like something I would hear from the mouth someone like Minoru Suzuki or Heyman. Straight to the point but very good at telling the story of Kingpin
Dislike: WHERE's THE RECREATION OF GODFATHER PROMOS!?!?!?!?! |
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Anthony Leonhart
Voltage
Posts : 1818
Age : 33
Hailing From : New Japan Wrestling Academy
Status : #IchimichiZaibatsuCorporation
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 28th 2016, 7:10 am | |
| Like : The passion you give to your character is impressive.
Dislike : A little bit of colors would be cool. |
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『zakkii』
Empire
Posts : 6357
Age : 32
Hailing From : WKWKWK Land
Status : 『Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there!』
| | Subject: Re: Like and Dislike (Promo Edition) July 28th 2016, 5:50 pm | |
| Like: an outstanding storytelling you try to decsribe with your monologue. Simple but pretty much spot on.
Dislike: well, just my pet peeve and you know what it is.... not a huge fan of dark and psychotic character. |
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