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PostSubject: RP review   May 9th 2017, 6:03 pm

I haven't written a RP/Promo for a e-character in about 3 years and wanted to just get a review of my latest one. This is a different character than I have ever used before so just wanted to see what everyone thought.

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PostSubject: Re: RP review   May 9th 2017, 6:39 pm

Nice job holmes welcome to the club. Yo promo reminds me of the color scheme I used to use a few months ago before I changed shit up. Keep on and I'm sure you gonna get back into the promoing game soon enough.


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PostSubject: Re: RP review   May 10th 2017, 10:12 am

I like it quite a bit.  I like the opening bit with the relationship between Charlie and Eric.  Some around here aren't big on character development or 'flavor text' as some put it, but I enjoy feeling like I'm watching a movie in my head.  You did right by having a straight promo at the end.  I get a good feel for the character and why he'd say the things he'd say because of the opening bit.  Always liked a good, surly, Un-PC Cowboy.
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