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Lars Grier Voltage
Posts : 867 Age : 20 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| Subject: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 8:27 pm | |
| Soooo.... here it is. I had a poster and matchcards made for Reasonable Doubt, but I never got around to posting it. Here's me making up for that, and matchcards will be made once stips are finalised. Thanks, feedback is lit. (Also Jamie I'm better than you ) |
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Nathan Fiora Voltage
Posts : 412 Age : 25 Hailing From : Chicago, Illinois Status : Proved everyone wrong.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 8:36 pm | |
| This looks great, man. My advice is to make the characters stand out a bit more. It seems like they're blending into the poster, which is cool and all, but they should be focused on. |
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TLA Voltage
Posts : 3007 Hailing From : Where they ain't want me to be #ThaHall Status : Bein' a badder hombre than ever before
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 8:37 pm | |
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Lars Grier Voltage
Posts : 867 Age : 20 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 8:38 pm | |
| - Nathan Fiora wrote:
- This looks great, man.
My advice is to make the characters stand out a bit more. It seems like they're blending into the poster, which is cool and all, but they should be focused on. I know what you mean, man. I was trying a different style here, a glitchy effect that I've never really done. Thanks for the feedback tho |
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Nathan Fiora Voltage
Posts : 412 Age : 25 Hailing From : Chicago, Illinois Status : Proved everyone wrong.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 8:40 pm | |
| - Lars Grier wrote:
- Nathan Fiora wrote:
- This looks great, man.
My advice is to make the characters stand out a bit more. It seems like they're blending into the poster, which is cool and all, but they should be focused on. I know what you mean, man. I was trying a different style here, a glitchy effect that I've never really done. Thanks for the feedback tho Ah, I feel ya. It still looks phenomenal; keep up the great work! |
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Jamie O'Hara Voltage
Posts : 1640 Age : 30 Hailing From : Melbourne, Australia Status : Dejected. Inspired.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 9:06 pm | |
| Ease up on the overall effect. It seems a little overwhelming. Probably wouldnt use Topaz to adjust the renders, better to use burn and dodge tools to givr yourself more control (Styles render looks a tad out of place). Bump up the saturation and mess around with the levels.
Back to Uni so to make it one less thing to deal woth, will likely use your match pics. |
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showster26 Dynasty
Posts : 1988 Age : 35 Hailing From : The Great State Of California Status : #HardWork
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 9:09 pm | |
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Lars Grier Voltage
Posts : 867 Age : 20 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 9:20 pm | |
| - Jamie O'Hara wrote:
- Ease up on the overall effect. It seems a little overwhelming. Probably wouldnt use Topaz to adjust the renders, better to use burn and dodge tools to givr yourself more control (Styles render looks a tad out of place). Bump up the saturation and mess around with the levels.
Back to Uni so to make it one less thing to deal woth, will likely use your match pics. What's funny is that I didn't use Topaz lol But seriously thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. |
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Aria Jaxon Empire
Posts : 2593 Age : 29 Hailing From : Sparks City, California. Status : Wanna seize the throne, but what would you do with all that control?
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 9:36 pm | |
| I like it! The glitchy look you said you were going for works with the whole vibe of Reckless Wiring, imo (kinda like the machinery/tech theme they went with last year). Good shit, Lars. |
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Sir Killian Charlamagne Dynasty
Posts : 1660 Age : 26 Hailing From : Camelot, Ontario, Canada Status : DEUS VULT!
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 11:33 pm | |
| I honestly can't wait to see what the other posters are going to look like. You made a fan out of me. |
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Rhyse
Posts : 280 Age : 25 Status : Level ya pussy up.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 1st 2017, 11:53 pm | |
| Bout to go full 'eFed/GFX hybrid GM' on this...but I'm about to drop my two cents.
What I'm seeing here is that you let one effect over-power the piece's overall vibe. In this case, the glitch effect you created looks rather out of place and distracting. I like the main Styles/Owens renders, but the others shouldn't be so blended in with the rest of the background. Plus, you could've easy filled up the space by adding more renders. The fonts definitely look out of place as well. When you think of a FPV with the name 'Reckless Wiring', the first thing that comes to mind is probably some sort of sci-fi font (which you attempted with the name 'Reckless', but the font used for 'Wiring' is rather random and unfitting).
I guess what I'm really trying to say here is when experimenting, results can turn out rather crappy if you're just trying out new things at random without really creating some sort of balance. Trust me I've been doing nothing lately but trying out new things, but you won't ever see me posting them because simply put, they're garbage. But anyways...
You really impressed me with the poster you made for King of Elite, and if I'm being honest, I'd love to see you pull out more bangers like that one. Also, if you ever need more opinions or resources, I gotchu fam. |
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вrσdч spαrks . Empire
Posts : 1634 Age : 30 Hailing From : Brockton ✈ Seattle Status : ís єvíl sσmєthíng чσu αrє? σr ís ít sσmєthíng чσu dσ?
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 2nd 2017, 12:03 am | |
| - Atilano Castillos wrote:
- Bout to go full 'eFed/GFX hybrid GM' on this...but I'm about to drop my two cents.
What I'm seeing here is that you let one effect over-power the piece's overall vibe. In this case, the glitch effect you created looks rather out of place and distracting. I like the main Styles/Owens renders, but the others shouldn't be so blended in with the rest of the background. Plus, you could've easy filled up the space by adding more renders. The fonts definitely look out of place as well. When you think of a FPV with the name 'Reckless Wiring', the first thing that comes to mind is probably some sort of sci-fi font (which you attempted with the name 'Reckless', but the font used for 'Wiring' is rather random and unfitting).
I guess what I'm really trying to say here is when experimenting, results can turn out rather crappy if you're just trying out new things at random without really creating some sort of balance. Trust me I've been doing nothing lately but trying out new things, but you won't ever see me posting them because simply put, they're garbage. But anyways...
You really impressed me with the poster you made for King of Elite, and if I'm being honest, I'd love to see you pull out more bangers like that one. Also, if you ever need more opinions or resources, I gotchu fam. a true legend. a true american hero |
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Lars Grier Voltage
Posts : 867 Age : 20 Hailing From : Places Status : I'm a noob, so I suck.
| Subject: Re: Lars' Reckless Wiring Poster (matchcards will be made soon) March 2nd 2017, 12:13 am | |
| - Atilano Castillos wrote:
- Bout to go full 'eFed/GFX hybrid GM' on this...but I'm about to drop my two cents.
What I'm seeing here is that you let one effect over-power the piece's overall vibe. In this case, the glitch effect you created looks rather out of place and distracting. I like the main Styles/Owens renders, but the others shouldn't be so blended in with the rest of the background. Plus, you could've easy filled up the space by adding more renders. The fonts definitely look out of place as well. When you think of a FPV with the name 'Reckless Wiring', the first thing that comes to mind is probably some sort of sci-fi font (which you attempted with the name 'Reckless', but the font used for 'Wiring' is rather random and unfitting).
I guess what I'm really trying to say here is when experimenting, results can turn out rather crappy if you're just trying out new things at random without really creating some sort of balance. Trust me I've been doing nothing lately but trying out new things, but you won't ever see me posting them because simply put, they're garbage. But anyways...
You really impressed me with the poster you made for King of Elite, and if I'm being honest, I'd love to see you pull out more bangers like that one. Also, if you ever need more opinions or resources, I gotchu fam. I was wondering when the OG Rhyse was coming back..... But seriously this is lit feedback. I realise now how shit my piece is haha |
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