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PostSubject: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 4:29 am

I posted my first top 10 wrestling video that I narrated and was wondering if I could get a few reviews to see if I should create some more in the future.











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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 5:41 am

Like that your doing the videos, and if you just work on a few things I think they'll be endgame better. First you might want to type up a scrip and rehearse it. This will cut Down on the noticeable pauses between words and also give you a chance to see if there are any spots where you might want to reword a section to help get the idea of message you want across in a better way. Also might want to figure out what issues are going on with your microphone volume. You went from whisper quiet to overly loud. If you fix those two little things I think you'll be golden.





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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 5:52 am

Nice video. As Show said, get a script and practice it in thoroughly before narrating. Also, get some more energy behind your voice in your videos. From what I have seen, even shit videos with high energy become popular.






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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 6:20 am

showster26 wrote:
Like that your doing the videos, and if you just work on a few things I think they'll be endgame better. First you might want to type up a scrip and rehearse it. This will cut Down on the noticeable pauses between words and also give you a chance to see if there are any spots where you might want to reword a section to help get the idea of message you want across in a better way. Also might want to figure out what issues are going on with your microphone volume. You went from whisper quiet to overly loud.  If you fix those two little things I think you'll be golden.
Will fir sure have a script next time, thank you for your words of advice. And I believe the high to low had to do with the worry of trying to overtake the background music, but I'll get it fixed.










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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 6:21 am

Mike Showman wrote:
Nice video. As Show said, get a script and practice it in thoroughly before narrating. Also, get some more energy behind your voice in your videos. From what I have seen, even shit videos with high energy become popular.
I kinda knew when I listened that I needed to be in higher spirit and that is one thing that I'm gonna work on for my next one.










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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 6:44 am

Terry Chambers wrote:
Mike Showman wrote:
Nice video. As Show said, get a script and practice it in thoroughly before narrating. Also, get some more energy behind your voice in your videos. From what I have seen, even shit videos with high energy become popular.
I kinda knew when I listened that I needed to be in higher spirit and that is one thing that I'm gonna work on for my next one.

Awesome, looking forward to your next one






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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 7:06 am

Showster and Showman (they could be a team based on their names, lol) have stated it all. Overall though, I enjoyed your video, just keep it up for your next work. I'll give it 8.4/10 (H).



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PostSubject: Re: Need some reviews.   December 23rd 2016, 1:58 pm

Nobi wrote:
Showster and Showman (they could be a team based on their names, lol) have stated it all. Overall though, I enjoyed your video, just keep it up for your next work. I'll give it 8.4/10 (H).
Thx alot.










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