I didn't see any threads specifically for this, but any opinions or criticism on the promo I did for Dynasty would be awesome. It's my first time trying to write an actual competitive promo in years, so any thoughts would be cool.

https://eawnetwork.forumotion.com/t3450p15-eaw-promoz#76092

Admittedly, promo feedback stuff has never been EAW's strongest element, it just doesn't seem like something the community strongly has a habit of doing consistently, so mostly people just have to deal with EAW show results and MVE to see how they're doing.

There is however this thread you could use in the future, as part of it was feedback getting(though it's become inactive, though perhaps some would start posting on it again for a short spurt after a revival by you or anyone else posting there). https://eawnetwork.forumotion.com/t2547-promo-lessons-thread

As for your promo in particular, if it's the one you posted a few days ago I recall reading it after you asked in main chat for feedback from people-you had left before I returned to answer you.-. I think it was a good promo from what I recall, you showed multiple sides of your character by showing how he interacts with his loved ones in a much more loving/light matter and how it contrasts to how much more serious/distant, determined and somewhat arrogant he is when involved with people in the actual wrestling industry. It'll be nice to see how you progress over the times as you continue on. The only other thing is I found it a bit funny how to me your font colour was much more feminine for your main character than the one you used when your girl was talking, which is pretty nonsensical of me but just something I recall thinking of lol, you can ignore that last part since its not a true critique. Good job and good luck in the future.

hey guys is my promo good


"yeah its GOAT kimbo"

"yeah its good"

"i didn't read it"


you chumps fucking suck at feedback