I posted my first promo and love to get your opinions on it.

I'm still new to the whole promo writing thing

Not back for a debut promo, but I believe you could have added a bit more of who Azumi Goto really is. You say that she has been pursuing wrestler all over the world. You can provide in just brief detail how she dominated in each country and give reasons as to why people should fear her. This is your first time doing something like this, so don't be worried or feel pressured. Once you start to learn and receive more guidance, you will be on your way. Good job!

Thank you

Maybe you need to read some other vixen's promo to inspire your own work. Create some spark by doing anything they didn't do to make yourself standout. Plus, Don't get yourself in a rush while making a promo. It's fine if you spend an hour or two for your one promo. That's all I can give... Good luck!