So my dudes I want your opinion on something: How far is too over the top? I ask because with the whole split personality gimmick I plan on having Paradise eventually take control but I want to try some trippy stuff like monolouges with Paradise in Mort's head and such.

i personally dont like hearing a voice that in someone's head.  like if one personality speaks and is having a conversation with another and both are speaking thru your body's mouth that's cool (and to be honest a little unique which helps the gimmick stand out against the other dark/ hearing voices charaters)  but if there's some internal monolog of thoughts, how does one respond to that?  it either makes your opponent (and everyone who reads it for that matter) psychic, or they have nothing to talk about on a personal level in promos.

also have you really decided on say a trigger that brings out that other side?  have you played around with the idea that Mortimer is the other personality?  and what makes both sides want to work as professional wrestlers?

As someone who has already done promos with voices and internal monologues, I don't think you can ever go too far. xD The way I like to envisage it is that all my promos are video packages with the voices done as a voice over so that the audience knows what's going on, or I create these kind of entities (done with special effects) so that the voices almost become real. I understand that's still not easy for the opponent to respond to because, in character, they wouldn't be hearing these voices, which is why I always have The Riddler talk about my opponents and use the voices in his head to basically concentrate on him, not his opponent(s).

If i can get away with some of the shit I've done recently than NOTHING is too over the top. I say do what you want and just have fun with it