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The Trickster Azrael

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PostSubject: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 1:35 pm

To all those who had read my two roleplay. i'll be glad to hear some feedback of which mistake i keep repeating. Cause i joins this federation to improve my English because it's ain't my first language.

Gotta admit i'm not a fan of dealing at those who use it in a way to target my roleplay or feed. It's like if an member  decide to joins a french e-fed and i do the same thing, it's annoying.

Any tips or good correction site would be appreciated ^^.
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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 1:55 pm

You're French-Canadian, right? Well my best advice for you is to stop. As an Eastern Canadian, Quebecois are the devil.

Nah, but for real, just read other people's promos and compare. See the difference with spelling and punctuation and just adapt. That's really the only way to improve.




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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 2:03 pm

The Trickster Azrael wrote:
To all those who had read my two roleplay. i'll be glad to hear some feedback of which mistake i keep repeating. Cause i joins this federation to improve my English because it's ain't my first language.

Gotta admit i'm not a fan of dealing at those who use it in a way to target my roleplay or feed. It's like if an member  decide to joins a french e-fed and i do the same thing, it's annoying.

Any tips or good correction site would be appreciated ^^.

Well to be honest you do make a lot of spelling errors so it'll be tough to point them all out, and also I would help but I already have like 20 promos to read a week.

What I will say is, grammar really has no bearing on whether or not you'll win. English isn't everyone's first language so we obviously understand that. As for people who use it against you in their promos, just ignore it. It really doesn't mean shit because they shouldn't be criticizing your typed-errors anyways.

You've been consistent so far so keep it up and the improvement will come naturally over time, good job thus far!



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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 2:15 pm

Just as advice don't be gettin' real mad when people diss how you talk in character. That's kind of a classic heel tactic. It's like if someone on WWE makes fun of how Nakamura talks they are the asshole not Nakamura. The thing is yo character is a heel so I say just use it to yo advantage and give yo opponents one more thing to hate on. Embrace yo self.

For real tho you goin' hard with yo English so far keep it up homie.


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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 2:19 pm

I've been in this case and I ignored them. And look now my English promos are better because I work on them, the way I can deliver them.



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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 2:36 pm

Dampshaw: I can assure you we aren't all séparatiste lol, and thanks for your tips. I'll try to as you said to improve my writing skill.

Stark&Leonhart: I think ignoring will be the best thing to do yeah or if i have something in mind, i could take the advice of TLA and work on my heel side.
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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 3:54 pm

Quebecois are the Devil? Yep! I'll own up to that. Now SUFFAH!!!! lol 

Ignoring the attack is one way to go with it.
I prefer to spin it and throw it back at the character. Classic heel tactic indeed but it's basic and elementary at best and for me it shows a lack of originality on part of the character.

I'm far from being perfect with my secondary language either, weirdly though I think I write better better Shakespear than Moliere. That's fine hehe.


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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 3:56 pm

Ryan Wilson wrote:
Quebecois are the Devil? Yep! I'll own up to that. Now SUFFAH!!!! lol 

Ignoring the attack is one way to go with it.
I prefer to spin it and throw it back at the character. Classic heel tactic indeed but it's basic and elementary at best and for me it shows a lack of originality on part of the character.

I'm far from being perfect with my secondary language either, weirdly though I think I write better better Shakespear than Moliere. That's fine hehe.
To me it's the opposite.
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PostSubject: Re: Spelling/grammar feedback   August 12th 2017, 3:58 pm

To most people it is.
But I was immerse in english at such a young age through immersion summer camps and I really plunged head first into it afterwards that most of what I do is in english from talking to reading, what I watched on TV, the games I played etc. No wonder my french suffered because of it. That's fine.


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