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PostSubject: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 4:11 am

Hey guys, some of you may know that I just recently started creating music videos for rappers or any other artists in my local area. I wanted to show you guys my first official music video that I've worked on. Of course, it's just a draft, I haven't put it out there on Facebook yet or showed other peers. I want you guys to review it and give me some feedback(negative or positive) It's much needed so I can learn what I need to do to engage the audience. I know a couple of things already such as the audio that needs a little fixing and words. But if there's anything else, I would appreciate your criticism. 

Let me know if the grey scenes are confusing. They are the storyline of the whole thing that will lead into the next video. And YES, I am also in the video as well. I'm the guy with the hooded shirt and hat. 

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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 6:25 am

Good job. I thought everything went together pretty well. Cool song, too.


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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 7:17 am

Not bad at all considering it's your first video
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 10:57 am

Really enjoyed it bro


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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 11:26 am

I think you did a great job!



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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 11:42 am

Honestly it was great!


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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 12:55 pm

Hot damn, man! Well done!!!



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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 2:47 pm

I think it looks awesome. You did a really great job!
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 4th 2016, 3:26 pm

It is nicely done. Looking forward for more






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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 5th 2016, 2:56 am

Thanks for all ya'll reviews, that really encouraged me to keep pushing. Love ya'll.
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PostSubject: Re: Constructive criticism   November 5th 2016, 5:07 am

This. Is. Fire. Your editing skills have sky rockted since I've since your R2R video last year! And yes...tjat one was awesome too Smile




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